From b9c284cde268f0865cc32d2c973206b227042700 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Gregor Kleen <kleen@cip.ifi.lmu.de>
Date: Wed, 30 Oct 2019 10:52:57 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] fix: typos

---
 templates/i18n/data-protection/en.hamlet | 32 ++++++++++++------------
 templates/i18n/imprint/en.hamlet         | 12 ++++-----
 2 files changed, 22 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-)

diff --git a/templates/i18n/data-protection/en.hamlet b/templates/i18n/data-protection/en.hamlet
index 9e744ac07..b1e4c7da0 100644
--- a/templates/i18n/data-protection/en.hamlet
+++ b/templates/i18n/data-protection/en.hamlet
@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@ $newline never
   <p>
     The LMU as a corporate body of public law is subject to #
     the BayDSG (bavarian legislation on data-protection), in some points the BDSG (Federal Data Protection Act), #
-    the GDPR (General Data Protection Regulation) and the corresponding articles relevant for data protection of special laws (Telemedia, Telecommunication, Employment Law, etc.).<br />
-    This data privacy statement fulfills the obligations to inform the user by the above-mentioned formalities.
+    the GDPR (General Data Protection Regulation), and the corresponding articles of special laws (Telemedia, Telecommunication, Employment Law, etc.) relevant to data protection.<br />
+    This data privacy statement fulfills the obligations to inform the user as result from the formalities mentioned above.
 
 
 <section>
@@ -73,36 +73,36 @@ $newline never
 
   The webserver records
   <ul>
-    <li>Pseudonym corresponding to the IP address of the user's webclient of this service
+    <li> Pseudonym corresponding to the IP address of the user's webclient
     <li> Date and time of the request of an element of the website
     <li> Address of the requested element
     <li> Amount of requested data
-    <li> Info whether the request was successful
+    <li> Info on whether the request was successful
     <li> Type and version of the webclient
     <li> Error messages if applicable
-    <li> Text of any search filter or sorting parameter if applicable
+    <li> Text of any search, filter, or sorting parameter as applicable
   <p>
-    In case of a disturbance or a security incident, the anonymisation of the IP address will be #
-    temporarily repealed.
+    In case of a disturbance or security incident, the pseudonymisation of the IP address will be #
+    temporarily suspended.
   <p>
     ipscrub (<a href="http://www.ipscrub.org">http://www.ipscrub.org</a>) is used to generate pseudonyms for IP addresses.
 
 
   <h4>Appropriation
   <p>
-    The collected data is only used for statistical analysis (in anonymised form), for enhancing Uni2work, # 
-    for analysis, elimination and protection against disturbances and in case of security incidents.<br />
-    Only the IT administrators responsible for the operation of the department Institut für Informatik # 
+    The collected data is only used for statistical analysis (in anonymised form), for enhancing Uni2work, #
+    for analysis, elimination and protection against disturbances, and in case of security incidents.<br />
+    Only the IT administrators responsible for the operation of the department Institut für Informatik #
     have access to the data.
 
   <h4> Legal or Contractual Basis of Data Processing
   <ul>
     <li> Obligation to sustainable and secure operation of IT services according to the state of the art (TMG, TKG, DSG, EUDGV, BayDSG, BDSG)
-    <li> Jurisdiction to the retention period and type of webserver protocols
-    <li> Perception of a task that is of public interest
+    <li> Legislation pertaining to the retention period and type of webserver protocols
+    <li> Performing of a function that is of public interest
 
   <h4> Disclosure
-  <p> The foremost legal contact person is the above-mentioned responsible department.
+  <p> First point of contact is the above-mentioned responsible department.
 
   <h4> Deletion
   <p>
@@ -112,10 +112,10 @@ $newline never
 
   <h4> Consent, Correction, Revocation, Request for Deletion or Transmission
   <p>
-    A consent to the processing of the data is not necessary due to the type of the collected data, its designated use, #
+    Consent is not required for the processing of the data due to the type of the collected data, its designated use, #
     the automated deletion and the basis of the collection (GDPR, Art. 6 Para. 1 e+f).<br />
     The right of withdrawal for data processing, the right of petition for deletion, the right of petition #
-    for correction and the right of petition for transmission are not applicable due to the consent to data processing 
+    for correction, and the right of petition for transmission are not applicable due to the consent to data processing #
     not being necessary as well as the type and use of the collected data.
 
   <h4> Right to appeal
@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ $newline never
     Users generally have the right to appeal to the supervisory body concerning any processing or transmission #
     of their personal data.<br />
     In case of the LMU Munich, the supervisory body is the above-mentioned Bavarian Data Protection Commissioner.<br />
-    Apart from that, any other above-mentioned legal contact person may be contacted concerning appeals and enquiries.
+    Apart from that, any other above-mentioned legal contact person may be contacted concerning appeals and inquiries.
 
   <h4> Obligation to participate in the processing of the data
   <p>
diff --git a/templates/i18n/imprint/en.hamlet b/templates/i18n/imprint/en.hamlet
index 43c712b20..8bb5c2779 100644
--- a/templates/i18n/imprint/en.hamlet
+++ b/templates/i18n/imprint/en.hamlet
@@ -37,9 +37,9 @@ $newline never
         https://www.rz.ifi.lmu.de/rbg/
     <li>Tel.: +49 (0) 89 / 2180 - 9198
   <p>
-    The IT Operations Team (RBG) is an organization of the department "Institut für Informatik", #
+    The IT Operations Team (RBG) is an organization of the department Institut für Informatik, #
     which is part of the LMU Munich.<br />
-    The IT Operations Team is represented by its leader and is subject to supervision # 
+    The IT Operations Team is represented by its leader and is subject to supervision #
     by the IT commissary of the directorate of the department.
 
 
@@ -53,8 +53,8 @@ $newline never
       <a href="https://www.ifi.lmu.de/front-page-en">
         https://www.ifi.lmu.de/
   <p>
-    The department "Institut für Informatik" is a part of the LMU Munich.<br />
-    The department is represented by the director of the department.
+    The department Institut für Informatik is a part of the LMU Munich.<br />
+    The department is represented by its director.
 
 
   <h3>LMU - Ludwig-Maximilians-Universität München
@@ -67,8 +67,8 @@ $newline never
       <a href="https://www.en.uni-muenchen.de/">
         https://www.lmu.de/
   <p>
-    The LMU Munich is a corporate body of the public law.<br />
-    It is legally represented by the president of the LMU Munich.
+    The LMU Munich is a corporate body of public law.<br />
+    It is legally represented by its president.
 
 
 <section>